Sweet finished my next installment I thought a view from a unknown character would add some depth, cause 'first person' (writing from the view of your char, and yours only/directly related) is kind of repetitive. Yay for freshness!
Lets roll people! Raid those farms, burn those villages! Poison those apples! Oh wait... haha. Gotta love the ol' poisoned apples Abduct people! Cease water and food supplies! Start fires! Be creative!
Love this RP, the characters are rocking. Bring the traitors and kill off some old and bring in new
Cheers lads
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my apparent bad shatt, sorry bro I still luv ya I was just confused...
dang it Zhar pssh fastforwarded... curses. okay ignore my character wanting to fast travel to get there ahead of the rest.
The guards are mine! Wuahahahahahaha!
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umm shatt, I thought it took a little longer than a 'few hours walking' to get to Thurzen? We had two weeks (or w e, or longer than one post) to complete our missions, unless I'm wrong? Lol that was quick... and didn't work at all with my previous post. Did you read it by chance?
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I am definitely still in. Just had a lot going on recently.
Same. Sorry mates! I'll get on it now, I wanted to see where it was going a bit before I posted.
deathmars = git and... a fecal tool who picks apart everything anybody says. I'm sure most people don't have the will or the patience to put up with a fool like that
troll me bitch (waves at deathmars
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Surely Archie a fire demon would require more air than the average demon wouldn't he? Because flame uses oxygen to burn and that is where they draw their power from? Just a thought
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Oh and Guasti's character, I love the twist you put on the plot. The supposition that you put in the reader's head that you have your own devious intentions, that may even threaten Basoriel life and his leadership
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@ Paths of the Dead - Well done my man! Well done. Outstanding first post! Do you have some form of writing history? English major? Screenwriting major? Do tell!
Haha thanks! And no I have no writing history, schooling that is. I've always loved writing about characters, especially imaginary/video game characters, or even just an outline about a particular unit and their back story.
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Paths, fucking wow, that was a fantastic post.
Had no idea you were that good a writer, I really didn't know what to expect from your first post
Thanks again! I love this story already, its well thought out. I can see how you and the others write and adapt their stories with their unique creatures, its awesome. You can follow it quite easily but it still has strong characters and all the little details anyone can devour.
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Lets roll people! Raid those farms, burn those villages! Poison those apples! Oh wait... haha. Gotta love the ol' poisoned apples Abduct people! Cease water and food supplies! Start fires! Be creative!
Love this RP, the characters are rocking. Bring the traitors and kill off some old and bring in new
Cheers lads
dang it Zhar pssh fastforwarded... curses. okay ignore my character wanting to fast travel to get there ahead of the rest.
The guards are mine! Wuahahahahahaha!
Same. Sorry mates! I'll get on it now, I wanted to see where it was going a bit before I posted.
deathmars = git and... a fecal tool who picks apart everything anybody says. I'm sure most people don't have the will or the patience to put up with a fool like that
troll me bitch (waves at deathmars