Reflection on ones self
is expression in itself
time keeps ticking and theres nobody to help
you wake up and scream
but nobody hears
your just a mumble in a jungle of shouts and screams
feel the depth and bredth of my voice
realize that ive gone too far and can never go back
I have no other choice
I claw the walls around me
As they draw ever nearer
Encompassing my very being
Challenging me to stop their advance
But I cannot when caught by her eyes
Stuck in her deadly trance
She draws me under the sand as I fight to withstand
But as my lungs fill with millions of grains
I can do nothing but realize
That life is parallel to hell
So I must maintain
and be prosperous
its said that the angels will guard me
but they do not come
they stand just out of my reach
afraid of who they will meet and what they will see
they don?t understand me or my beliefs
they don?t get how I can be so serene
then explode with the force of a war macine
tearing myself apart at every seam
I become enraged
My past fuels my anger
As I look to the future
I realize that there is no escape
It will always be there
To mock and rape
Crazy... I can't say that I got all of the references/allusions, but what I understood was interesting.
2 questions, though.
1) Does this piece have a title?
2) Does it belong on the fan fiction board? The boards are new so everyone's trying to figure out how to use them, but this sounds like an original piece, rather than fiction based off of something. Perhaps it belongs on the general writing board instead?
P.S can I post storys here that are not related to any blizzard game at all? I made stories for my clan and im wonderin if I could post them here and see if anyone might like them. My clan shure thought it was awesome.
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If you want to arrange it
This world you can change it
If we could somehow make this
Christmas thing last
By helping a neighbor
Or even a stranger
And to know who needs help
You need only just ask
is expression in itself
time keeps ticking and theres nobody to help
you wake up and scream
but nobody hears
your just a mumble in a jungle of shouts and screams
feel the depth and bredth of my voice
realize that ive gone too far and can never go back
I have no other choice
I claw the walls around me
As they draw ever nearer
Encompassing my very being
Challenging me to stop their advance
But I cannot when caught by her eyes
Stuck in her deadly trance
She draws me under the sand as I fight to withstand
But as my lungs fill with millions of grains
I can do nothing but realize
That life is parallel to hell
So I must maintain
and be prosperous
its said that the angels will guard me
but they do not come
they stand just out of my reach
afraid of who they will meet and what they will see
they don?t understand me or my beliefs
they don?t get how I can be so serene
then explode with the force of a war macine
tearing myself apart at every seam
I become enraged
My past fuels my anger
As I look to the future
I realize that there is no escape
It will always be there
To mock and rape
gamma11 > east
2 questions, though.
1) Does this piece have a title?
2) Does it belong on the fan fiction board? The boards are new so everyone's trying to figure out how to use them, but this sounds like an original piece, rather than fiction based off of something. Perhaps it belongs on the general writing board instead?
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Wise ElderP.S can I post storys here that are not related to any blizzard game at all? I made stories for my clan and im wonderin if I could post them here and see if anyone might like them. My clan shure thought it was awesome.
If you want to arrange it
This world you can change it
If we could somehow make this
Christmas thing last
By helping a neighbor
Or even a stranger
And to know who needs help
You need only just ask
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