I hope I'm not overstepping my bounds here. Personally, I'd take it as a compliment if someone was interested in my writing enough to catch errors
No worries. Constructive criticism is awesome. The only crit I have problems with is the straight up "I don't like this" kind.
Most of the errors in the writing are the result of me not properly checking it over and / or writing too quickly. Most of the errors I've actually noticed and fixed in the original word document, but they remain the same in the PDF.
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Not bad my friend. From a fantasy writer to another I liked it. There were a few issues here and there but I'm not going to comment to harshly because you said it was outdated. Can I ask to see something current of yours? I'd love to see your true abilities for myself.
Haha, thanks. Actually, to be honest, I haven't done much traditional writing lately. All the writing I've been doing has been Forum Roleplaying. The posts are usually short or intertwined with other people's writing. If I ever write something proper again it'll likely be some sort of FanFic and therefore will probably end up in here. Just keep an eye out.
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We want more, we want more, we want more. (Well, I do anyway!:P)
Haha, thanks, C. Maybe in a while when school is over and I'm still a jobless bum and have nothing to do I'll pick this up again.
Here's a sample of the story I was working a year or two ago. I haven't done any work on it lately, and it's a pretty out-dated sample of my writing, but I felt like I ought to get the ball rolling here in the brand new Fan Fiction section.
No worries. Constructive criticism is awesome. The only crit I have problems with is the straight up "I don't like this" kind.
Most of the errors in the writing are the result of me not properly checking it over and / or writing too quickly. Most of the errors I've actually noticed and fixed in the original word document, but they remain the same in the PDF.
Haha, thanks. Actually, to be honest, I haven't done much traditional writing lately. All the writing I've been doing has been Forum Roleplaying. The posts are usually short or intertwined with other people's writing. If I ever write something proper again it'll likely be some sort of FanFic and therefore will probably end up in here. Just keep an eye out.
Haha, thanks, C. Maybe in a while when school is over and I'm still a jobless bum and have nothing to do I'll pick this up again.
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Let me know what you guys think, I guess.