And Fudlow, what do you mean by the style? Is it just not your favorite or does it take away from your experience? Let me know, if anything it can enhance the story.
What do you like about it and what don't you? Everyone pitch in!
I don't know, its hard to explain what style is (at least for me). Maybe I'm talking about the tone you present and that I get from when I read it. Like when you read LOTR and Eragon- they both are kinda the same story(as far as people, time and epicness), but their authors present stuff differently and you get a different vibe when you read it, you know? Yeah, I can't explain it... but its a very enjoyable read and your style doesn't take away from my experience, it adds to it.
in chapter 2 you didn't really introduce Elfen. or was that intentional?
like i said before, i hardly ever have anything to say cuz i figure its your style and its fun to read so i don't really want anything to change just for my benefit. otherwise i'd just write my own story yeah?
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I don't know, its hard to explain what style is (at least for me). Maybe I'm talking about the tone you present and that I get from when I read it. Like when you read LOTR and Eragon- they both are kinda the same story(as far as people, time and epicness), but their authors present stuff differently and you get a different vibe when you read it, you know? Yeah, I can't explain it... but its a very enjoyable read and your style doesn't take away from my experience, it adds to it.
like i said before, i hardly ever have anything to say cuz i figure its your style and its fun to read so i don't really want anything to change just for my benefit. otherwise i'd just write my own story yeah?