well, to be honest, I thought you character was using the same magic as mine. My character was able to slow/freeze time and mess with people's minds. I thought that is where you were going with your character and that was part of the reason I am chanig mine.
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Lol, keep in mind though, if he was given demon-borne powers, then he probably wouldn't be hanging out with a bunch of slaves.
It's tricky making a character that stays believable, yet still gives you the freedom to be a badass, and to do what you want him to.
And also, Scyber we've already got a dark caster lol, Venom took a necro.
AND!
I'd also like to point out that we don't NEED to use spells from diablo, you're welcome to make up your own elements (have fun Turmobil ^^), spells, spell effects, anything of the like as long as it stays within the realm of "possible".
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"One in every 10 million people can potentially have a headache from this pill." God forbid she is the 0.000000001% of having a headache.
I like how you gave him very clearly defined, and contrasting, strengths and weaknesses. Made him powerful in his specialty, and weak in the exact opposite. Good way to make him not become overly godly.
The bio itself is quite good as well, overall great work mate ^^.
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"One in every 10 million people can potentially have a headache from this pill." God forbid she is the 0.000000001% of having a headache.
I wanted to join this game as well and, after PM-ing Zhar about it, I have created a character. I will not be able to join you on your ship, but I will meet you shortly.
You can find my character's info, and Short story Bio, in the appropriate thread.
Edit:
I'm sorry my character has some overlap with other people. When I read the thread I suddenly had the idea for this character and just wanted to join. Although he looks like a patchwork from other people's characters, I hope he can be seen as somebody else.
Fantastic bio mate, I really enjoyed reading it.
Was more like a story than a bio lol, you really outlined his past effectively.
Anywho, you can choose specific weapons to wield, the weapons section is reserved for the actual weapon your character carries around. In your case, it would probably be a wand or a dagger.
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"One in every 10 million people can potentially have a headache from this pill." God forbid she is the 0.000000001% of having a headache.
His weapon has always been what he just the best dagger he has scavenged. I do have an idea for an other weapon, but I think it's cooler if he gets it as an upgrade to his current.
And I knew the bio would be quite large, it's one of the problems I've got when creating such things: I see that guy and his past and want to cram in as much as I possibly can.
Haha, no worries, a longer bio is perfectly fine. I actually prefer longer bios, as you can see from mine. Just gives us a deeper understanding of who your character is.
BUT ANYWHO!
Gonna discuss with you how we'll work your guy in, so you can be ready for it when the time comes.
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"One in every 10 million people can potentially have a headache from this pill." God forbid she is the 0.000000001% of having a headache.
These RP waters are new to me, but I think it'll be fun.
Turmobil, I'm having trouble deciphering your age from the story. The boy that opens the book seems rather young, but the character you present seems about 5-10 years older than him. He couldn't live in Caldeum after what happened, so there seems to be a gap.
I can't see anything else that needs some changing, or are you searching for a more subtle corruption? "Accidents happen when he's around" and such, because it would be hard for a fully corrupted human to join the squad.
For example you could let him read a small part each day, or each week, for a couple of years. When bullies would pester him and he would be pushed to his knees, small drops of blood from wounds could trigger the occult magic. Then the bullies die of a heart attack.
I'll stop there, but that might be an idea you could take a look at.
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It's tricky making a character that stays believable, yet still gives you the freedom to be a badass, and to do what you want him to.
And also, Scyber we've already got a dark caster lol, Venom took a necro.
AND!
I'd also like to point out that we don't NEED to use spells from diablo, you're welcome to make up your own elements (have fun Turmobil ^^), spells, spell effects, anything of the like as long as it stays within the realm of "possible".
Well, from my perspective. A caster and a necro are different. Summoning minions plays out differently from casting spells. But, that is my opinion.
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I like how you gave him very clearly defined, and contrasting, strengths and weaknesses. Made him powerful in his specialty, and weak in the exact opposite. Good way to make him not become overly godly.
The bio itself is quite good as well, overall great work mate ^^.
But lol, more extravagant eye colours. Why is nobody satisfied with normal colours :(.
there's no magic about normal colours :confused:
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However, the guards will probably have kept our things to the side, to trade once we arrived in port.
....SPOILER ALERT!!
I wanted to join this game as well and, after PM-ing Zhar about it, I have created a character. I will not be able to join you on your ship, but I will meet you shortly.
You can find my character's info, and Short story Bio, in the appropriate thread.
Edit:
I'm sorry my character has some overlap with other people. When I read the thread I suddenly had the idea for this character and just wanted to join. Although he looks like a patchwork from other people's characters, I hope he can be seen as somebody else.
Join the chat!
Was more like a story than a bio lol, you really outlined his past effectively.
Anywho, you can choose specific weapons to wield, the weapons section is reserved for the actual weapon your character carries around. In your case, it would probably be a wand or a dagger.
And I knew the bio would be quite large, it's one of the problems I've got when creating such things: I see that guy and his past and want to cram in as much as I possibly can.
Join the chat!
BUT ANYWHO!
Gonna discuss with you how we'll work your guy in, so you can be ready for it when the time comes.
Promise you will like it though, Zhar has some epic writing skills
edit: Hey Shatterer never seen you around these parts before so allow me to welcome you to the forums
Turmobil, I'm having trouble deciphering your age from the story. The boy that opens the book seems rather young, but the character you present seems about 5-10 years older than him. He couldn't live in Caldeum after what happened, so there seems to be a gap.
I can't see anything else that needs some changing, or are you searching for a more subtle corruption? "Accidents happen when he's around" and such, because it would be hard for a fully corrupted human to join the squad.
For example you could let him read a small part each day, or each week, for a couple of years. When bullies would pester him and he would be pushed to his knees, small drops of blood from wounds could trigger the occult magic. Then the bullies die of a heart attack.
I'll stop there, but that might be an idea you could take a look at.
Join the chat!