Well, I'm making this thread so its easier for me to keep track of the descriptions and ideas you guys may have. Not only that, so that you get more of an idea whats going on. Of course, you won't see anything we don't disclose officially, but I'll give you guys enough for you to make your own ideas about it.
-hair color : Black (long) -body frame : average to muscular -Height: tall but not giant -weapon style : Bastard sword -armor color : dark silver -armor type : Heavy armor -emphasis on knowledge or combat : exceptional swordsmanship, but also possess some magical abilities, generally for enhancing my combat abilities. no arcane spells, im no mage.
as the face is obscured i shall provide the following pic
more specifically the right hand side.
Jetrall
Haha. Just in case - for some bizarre reason - I get included in this, this is what I look like (pretty much EXACTLY)...
Nattenshi
Hair color: black
body frame: small =)
muscle mass: not alot...
weapon style: magic! =D
armor color: blue and purple
emphasis on knowledge or combat: not alot... but some
Fudlow
hair color:Brown body frame:Skinny frame but toned muscle mass:not big and hulky, but kinda buff i guess weapon style:staff and a sword armor color: I'd use a robe, but i'd have the capabilities of summoning armor. silver obviously;) shouldn't we all be wearing silver? emphasis on knowledge or combat: hang back and shoot spells. able to 'throw down with the best of them' (as you terrans say it) when the time comes, as I am a mage/warrior. perhaps I could throw around some enchants or something of the sort. or maybe i could use a fire sword:confused:
Darkness Angel
hair color : Brown
body frame : Light n' Lean
muscle mass : Very small
weapon style : Wooden Staff
armor color : White and Blue
emphasis on knowledge or combat : Master of the elemental magic
Thasador
Well Carloseus...you know how I am personally and this is what I want as my appearance...
Caliban
hair color: brown, long
body frame: heavy set (some muscle, some fattyness =P)
muscle mass: some muscle, fairly built
weapon style: the same sword as tristin (from the king arthur movie) also, i would like to have a bow as my main weapon. close combat archery is my kind of thing. (kind of like legolas from the lord of the rings- if possible)
armor color:Brown leather with some metal.
emphasis on knowledge or combat: Decent swordsman, skilled in archery.
Winston
Everything is like this guy or my avatar. Except my armour/clothes isn't/aren't as bright. I'm agile, quick and moderate in strength.
-Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To obtain, something of equal value must be lost. That is alchemy's First Law of Equivalent Exchange. In those days, we really believed that to be the world's one, and only, truth.
in chapter 2 you didn't really introduce Elfen. or was that intentional?
like i said before, i hardly ever have anything to say cuz i figure its your style and its fun to read so i don't really want anything to change just for my benefit. otherwise i'd just write my own story yeah?
Its intentional. its like the Fuhrer in Fullmetal Alchemist. the first time you see him he isnt an overly major role, but later in the series he is. esp. towards the end of the series.
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-Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To obtain, something of equal value must be lost. That is alchemy's First Law of Equivalent Exchange. In those days, we really believed that to be the world's one, and only, truth.
Well, I like the way the story is going so far. I just hope you add some comedy to it somewhere in the story so that it can lighten up the mode. like the tavern for instant it could bring a couple of good laughs. well anyway keep up the good work
The chapters will vary from person to person, but the minds we get into the most will be myself, Thas, and Darkjay. Thats all I will say for now.
And Fudlow, what do you mean by the style? Is it just not your favorite or does it take away from your experience? Let me know, if anything it can enhance the story.
What do you like about it and what don't you? Everyone pitch in!
I like the novel so far very much. Vivid details and descriptions. Flawless story and topic sense. GFG!
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Hero of the Trojan War, son of Telamon, thus called the Telamonian Ajax, also called Ajax the Greater. In the Iliad he is represented as a gigantic man, slow of thought and speech, but quick in battle and always showing courage. He led the troops of Salamis against Troy and was one of the foremost Greek warriors, fighting both Hector and Odysseus to draws.
''May the Gods give you the strength and power to bear the madness which flows through our minds.''
''Zubin, I've always imagined you as a crazy raver. The kinda guy that spends all night dancing to trance music while waving glow sticks and popping ecstasy.'' - Murderface
And Fudlow, what do you mean by the style? Is it just not your favorite or does it take away from your experience? Let me know, if anything it can enhance the story.
What do you like about it and what don't you? Everyone pitch in!
I don't know, its hard to explain what style is (at least for me). Maybe I'm talking about the tone you present and that I get from when I read it. Like when you read LOTR and Eragon- they both are kinda the same story(as far as people, time and epicness), but their authors present stuff differently and you get a different vibe when you read it, you know? Yeah, I can't explain it... but its a very enjoyable read and your style doesn't take away from my experience, it adds to it.
I don't know, its hard to explain what style is (at least for me). Maybe I'm talking about the tone you present and that I get from when I read it. Like when you read LOTR and Eragon- they both are kinda the same story(as far as people, time and epicness), but their authors present stuff differently and you get a different vibe when you read it, you know? Yeah, I can't explain it... but its a very enjoyable read and your style doesn't take away from my experience, it adds to it.
Like what I taught my daughter to say..."ROCK ON DUDE!"
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Those before me shall quiver in my wake as I unleash the fury within!
marriage? possibly. but fighting is gnerally the direction the novel will go in, there is sure to be some for of love interest but it wont be major i dont think, and i doubt it will get all Leia/Han Solo on you, (they eventually got married and had twins).
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-Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To obtain, something of equal value must be lost. That is alchemy's First Law of Equivalent Exchange. In those days, we really believed that to be the world's one, and only, truth.
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like i said before, i hardly ever have anything to say cuz i figure its your style and its fun to read so i don't really want anything to change just for my benefit. otherwise i'd just write my own story yeah?
And Fudlow, what do you mean by the style? Is it just not your favorite or does it take away from your experience? Let me know, if anything it can enhance the story.
What do you like about it and what don't you? Everyone pitch in!
''Zubin, I've always imagined you as a crazy raver. The kinda guy that spends all night dancing to trance music while waving glow sticks and popping ecstasy.'' - Murderface
I don't know, its hard to explain what style is (at least for me). Maybe I'm talking about the tone you present and that I get from when I read it. Like when you read LOTR and Eragon- they both are kinda the same story(as far as people, time and epicness), but their authors present stuff differently and you get a different vibe when you read it, you know? Yeah, I can't explain it... but its a very enjoyable read and your style doesn't take away from my experience, it adds to it.
:confused: Good, and yourself Lord Thasador?
I AM NOT GOING TO START >_<
marriage? possibly. but fighting is gnerally the direction the novel will go in, there is sure to be some for of love interest but it wont be major i dont think, and i doubt it will get all Leia/Han Solo on you, (they eventually got married and had twins).