I see two images and a broken link for the third one. The first image, sketch with reds colored in, is very good. The second one, the detail ideas are fine but in the execution I don't think they came out so well as they could have. The image looks over-CGed, kind of plastic-y. It doesn't draw me in anymore.
god grant me the serenity,
to accept the things i cannot change, courage to change the things i can and wisdom to know the difference
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Stay awhile, and listen.
Which Final Fantasy Character Are You?
Final Fantasy 7