So, been quite a long while picked up my tablet and did something 2d, bit too long perhaps since this one didn't turn out that great. Its not exactly fan art since its not an exact replica of the D1 ones, but it sorta relates to Diablo. Anyhow, yes she is meant to look slightly disturbing and demon like, so not exactly "beautiful". Enjoy, or not, as the case may be!
AHh, that is SO AWESOME. I love it. I especially like her hair, face and chest lol. But her stomach muscles are a little ugly... though, as you said, she is a demon afterall. I don't like the wings as much though. I dunno, I always have a problem with wings, so don't worry about that so much.
Wings seem to be hard to do right. But also her stomach seems too muscular, is not masculine.
Here is a Succubus with a slightly feminine mid section. It is more slender, and not quite as ripped.
The flames below her are sort of reflected onto her wings.
But overall, a very nice image of a Succubus you have there. I trust you will be enlightening us with more.
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The problem that everyone is stating, isn't just the size or shape of the abs. It is actually an improper muscle structure. Foreams, quads, biceps, intercoastals, deltoids, they are all wrong.
Proportions are off a bit too. Her left shoulder is too far away from the body, and the head should be a tad bit bigger.
A trick for figuring out what proportions are wrong. Flip your drawing upside down, then look at it. Tons of things will pop out right away. Keep practicing, you have some potential. :thumbsup:
You could yes. That covers most of the anatomical inaccuracy's, but her mid section is still a little to muscular.
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She's gorgeous, the masculine look is quite hot. She sure can whip my- *silenced*.
I think you just found something out about yourself.
If you are gay and like the whole "masculine look", go right ahead, I've got no prob. But I like my women thin, supple, with toned (not ripped, pushed out) abs. A 36" waist isn't attractive to me, but I'm a 31" waist, so maybe that's my problem, but I don't think I'm alone.
Any of the girls that are on this site would just laugh at how fake that drawing is.
Don't get me wrong though, it is a decent drawing. Lighting and shading are very good. Just the proportions and features are off. I'm not even gonna start about how bad her right nipple looks, let alone her entire chest.
Archie, you are an arrogant piece of narcissist sexist (insert bad word). Not all women are 100% beautiful, you know, and judging them by their waist is just... horrible. Or by their looks, anyway. Speaking of the image. It's a succubus, not a woman, and, personally, it looks great, the strange abs make it look different but whether or not was that intended I don't really know. Oh, btw, I am a girl.
Yeah the abs are a tad strange looking. But I really like the colors and the shadows on it. Nicely done.
I disagree, i think the abs look right. A lot of times a womans oblique muscles run into the abs with what appears to be an inward curve that shape the abs a bit.
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Archie, you are an arrogant piece of narcissist sexist (insert bad word). Not all women are 100% beautiful, you know, and judging them by their waist is just... horrible. Or by their looks, anyway. Speaking of the image. It's a succubus, not a woman, and, personally, it looks great, the strange abs make it look different but whether or not was that intended I don't really know. Oh, btw, I am a girl.
I know you are a girl, but if someone says they don't judge people by looks they are lying. It's not the only thing I look for, but it is the first thing that gets a girl (or guy)recognized. Am I right? I thought so. But I don't want to spam up this thread anymore.
I never said it wasn't good artwork. In fact I said that it was good twice. It just needs some work, and the OP needs a little bit more practice with muscle and skeletal structure.
And I can guarantee that the OP was trying to go for accurate ripped human abs, but didn't have a source to look at to compare how they look when squating like that. So the OP just guessed what they would look like. Trust me, I have seen this exact error many many times from other artists. It is actually a little difficult to draw abs correctly when they are compressed in a squatting position. But props to the OP for making a good attempt.
The only thing i found slightly out of place with the ab's is that above the first set, the rectus abdominal muscle is a bit over exaggerated giving what may appear to be a slight bulge.
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"We're like the downtown of the Diablo related internet lol"
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I know you are a girl, but if someone says they don't judge people by looks they are lying. It's not the only thing I look for, but it is the first thing that gets a girl (or guy)recognized. Am I right? I thought so. But I don't want to spam up this thread anymore.
I recognize by language, movement, occupation, not necessarily looks. Looks are there, but a good looking guy alone will never get my attention. The reverse, probably, the best looking guys are almost always assholes, the moderates ones are the best in nature. I guess the same is not true for you. You look for the hottest girl on the beach always or something?
But discussing actual NUMBERS of how thin a fucking girl's waist should be so that you're happy is ridiculous and extremely shallow.
I recognize by language, movement, occupation, not necessarily looks. Looks are there, but a good looking guy alone will never get my attention. The reverse, probably, the best looking guys are almost always assholes, the moderates ones are the best in nature. I guess the same is not true for you. You look for the hottest girl on the beach always or something?
But discussing actual NUMBERS of how thin a fucking girl's waist should be so that you're happy is ridiculous and extremely shallow.
Say you're walking through a mall, and a gorgeous guy smiles at you as he is walking by. Do you smile back? He tries to talk to you. Do you then proceed to talk to him, or do you just keep walking? You don't know how much money he has, or who he really is, all you have to go by is looks and the way he walks.
All I'm doing is putting a number to something instead of saying "thin". What is bad about that? All I'm saying is that I don't date fat girls. Sorry if that makes me shallow, but I have standards. Would you date a 300lb guy? I doubt it.
I could always attack your shallowness for looking at where the guy works and how much money he has.
rofl, i just realized i was looking at elfens pick and not the real one. nevermind my comments thus far, the abs probably look funky to me too rofl
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But I do really like the tail, very well done!
Here is a Succubus with a slightly feminine mid section. It is more slender, and not quite as ripped.
The flames below her are sort of reflected onto her wings.
But overall, a very nice image of a Succubus you have there. I trust you will be enlightening us with more.
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The problem that everyone is stating, isn't just the size or shape of the abs. It is actually an improper muscle structure. Foreams, quads, biceps, intercoastals, deltoids, they are all wrong.
Proportions are off a bit too. Her left shoulder is too far away from the body, and the head should be a tad bit bigger.
A trick for figuring out what proportions are wrong. Flip your drawing upside down, then look at it. Tons of things will pop out right away. Keep practicing, you have some potential. :thumbsup:
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Wow......
I think you just found something out about yourself.
If you are gay and like the whole "masculine look", go right ahead, I've got no prob. But I like my women thin, supple, with toned (not ripped, pushed out) abs. A 36" waist isn't attractive to me, but I'm a 31" waist, so maybe that's my problem, but I don't think I'm alone.
Any of the girls that are on this site would just laugh at how fake that drawing is.
Don't get me wrong though, it is a decent drawing. Lighting and shading are very good. Just the proportions and features are off. I'm not even gonna start about how bad her right nipple looks, let alone her entire chest.
I disagree, i think the abs look right. A lot of times a womans oblique muscles run into the abs with what appears to be an inward curve that shape the abs a bit.
-Equinox
"We're like the downtown of the Diablo related internet lol"
-Winged
I know you are a girl, but if someone says they don't judge people by looks they are lying. It's not the only thing I look for, but it is the first thing that gets a girl (or guy)recognized. Am I right? I thought so. But I don't want to spam up this thread anymore.
I never said it wasn't good artwork. In fact I said that it was good twice. It just needs some work, and the OP needs a little bit more practice with muscle and skeletal structure.
And I can guarantee that the OP was trying to go for accurate ripped human abs, but didn't have a source to look at to compare how they look when squating like that. So the OP just guessed what they would look like. Trust me, I have seen this exact error many many times from other artists. It is actually a little difficult to draw abs correctly when they are compressed in a squatting position. But props to the OP for making a good attempt.
-Equinox
"We're like the downtown of the Diablo related internet lol"
-Winged
I recognize by language, movement, occupation, not necessarily looks. Looks are there, but a good looking guy alone will never get my attention. The reverse, probably, the best looking guys are almost always assholes, the moderates ones are the best in nature. I guess the same is not true for you. You look for the hottest girl on the beach always or something?
But discussing actual NUMBERS of how thin a fucking girl's waist should be so that you're happy is ridiculous and extremely shallow.
Say you're walking through a mall, and a gorgeous guy smiles at you as he is walking by. Do you smile back? He tries to talk to you. Do you then proceed to talk to him, or do you just keep walking? You don't know how much money he has, or who he really is, all you have to go by is looks and the way he walks.
All I'm doing is putting a number to something instead of saying "thin". What is bad about that? All I'm saying is that I don't date fat girls. Sorry if that makes me shallow, but I have standards. Would you date a 300lb guy? I doubt it.
I could always attack your shallowness for looking at where the guy works and how much money he has.
I think Corwyn removed all the stuff from his site about Diablo. He said something like that in another thread.
Shame, wanted to see the picture.
-Equinox
"We're like the downtown of the Diablo related internet lol"
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