lol, I don't get it either. Maybe its a cultural thing? I've never heard of Fruit Gushers before. Is Joe calling Fruit Gushers a demon?
Either way, I really like your artistic style. I like how you've used brown instead of black, so with the pale background it looks kind of washed out, which makes it an appealing style. As I said before, this really has potential, as long as the jokes are good lol
listen I know this is going to sound harsh but i'm not trying to make you feel bad.
leaving the humorous content (or lack there of) aside...
the drawing is terrible. not god awful, just terrible. If you used a computer program to draw and color this comic I suggest you practice more. If you drew it in pencil and then scanned it I suggest you practice a lot more.
It might be funnier if it was just drawn better >_>
I think this has amazing artwork but you just need to work on the jokes. I used paint program before and it is extremely hard so I do give you much credit for that. Maybe on your next piece you should hand draw it and scan it to your computer, sort of like the Deeha'Blothri comic series.
Even if the style isn't what you want it to be it will evolve.
If the jokes seemed to forced or aren't really that clever, you'll get better.
Basically stick to it, you'll get people reading your comic regularly if you keep pumping them out and don't take huge leaves of absences. Tatsuya Ishida's Sinfest and Penny Arcade show a lot of change in both departments.
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Either way, I really like your artistic style. I like how you've used brown instead of black, so with the pale background it looks kind of washed out, which makes it an appealing style. As I said before, this really has potential, as long as the jokes are good lol
Also, it wasn't really funny, at all.
leaving the humorous content (or lack there of) aside...
the drawing is terrible. not god awful, just terrible. If you used a computer program to draw and color this comic I suggest you practice more. If you drew it in pencil and then scanned it I suggest you practice a lot more.
It might be funnier if it was just drawn better >_>
sorry.
If the jokes seemed to forced or aren't really that clever, you'll get better.
Basically stick to it, you'll get people reading your comic regularly if you keep pumping them out and don't take huge leaves of absences. Tatsuya Ishida's Sinfest and Penny Arcade show a lot of change in both departments.
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