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    posted a message on Sight Unseen
    Lost it at "Killer halberd-wielding bovine" :hehe:

    (“Shouldn’t you be off killing demons,” Kifu heard from his right. He surveyed the area and saw Kiraf shouting at him as bashed a member of the Seven Stones in the face with his wooden shield. The man fell to his feet and Kiraf made quick work of digging his poison-laced dagger deep into the man’s chest.) *** I think your missing "he" in between 'as' and 'bashed' ***


    ("His people needed him now and that was where is focus was needed".)
    *** I think 'is' was suppose to be 'his' ***

    A 'crevasse' is usually associated with ice but since this is fantasy I'll let that one slide :lol:

    Other than that this is a great story.
    At first I thought "Too long; not gonna read it". But then I thought "F*@# it". And I'm glad I changed my mind :wd:
    Posted in: Fan Fiction
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    posted a message on You already know you are going to be playing too much Diablo IIII when...
    ... you see a quarter on the ground and you keep walking over it thinking you will auto pick it up
    Posted in: Diablo III General Discussion
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