Sorry I haven't got to it yet. Got caught up in a anime. XD Will read it ASAP. Possibly tonight if fiancee doesn't want to hang out. She works nights and it's her day off.
BTW are these names loosely based on forum names? Rykkard. Figolan.
Just finished the second part. Very good. I can't wait to see where this goes.
I had almost thought for a moment Eyrin wasn't truly Rykkards daughter maybe that's why the necklace wasn't working like Oriax had intended.
I preferred the ending actually more. Though it was a bit sad. :tongue:
[spoil]I hope Rykkard can make a comeback... The amber necklace does have certain powers to raise the dead. She knows where his body is and he swore that Oriax would pay.[/spoil]
My only criticism and it might just be me is details can be a great way to make a setting more familiar to the reader but they can be overdone. In this case it worked out good, details more heavily in the beginning to get a sense and then a little more lax to get back to the meat of the story.
Thats usually the problem I have with books especially fantasy novels some go too far into detail about small things that really don't matter THAT much. That was the the hardest part about reading the Diablo books for me. It gets boring if you oversaturate your story with that.
All in all though, very good read. I'm jealous I can't portray some of my ideas in such a well construed manner. :thumbsup:
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Wise Elder[spoil]I hope Rykkard can make a comeback... The amber necklace does have certain powers to raise the dead. She knows where his body is and he swore that Oriax would pay.[/spoil]
My only criticism and it might just be me is details can be a great way to make a setting more familiar to the reader but they can be overdone. In this case it worked out good, details more heavily in the beginning to get a sense and then a little more lax to get back to the meat of the story.
Thats usually the problem I have with books especially fantasy novels some go too far into detail about small things that really don't matter THAT much. That was the the hardest part about reading the Diablo books for me. It gets boring if you oversaturate your story with that.
All in all though, very good read. I'm jealous I can't portray some of my ideas in such a well construed manner. :thumbsup: