At first I thought this was going to be a fan fiction of the Slayers guild in SICK
I was about to destroy him for copyright infringement lol.
Not a bad story, you can work on the punctuation. There are some parts where you should add to the story and description, and others where you should probably back off a bit. Not bad overall though.
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I was about to destroy him for copyright infringement lol.
Not a bad story, you can work on the punctuation. There are some parts where you should add to the story and description, and others where you should probably back off a bit. Not bad overall though.