Warning: Mature Content in the FORUM CHALLENGE link, viewer discretion is advised.
Now I've decided to do a FORUM CHALLENGE here on diablofans.com. This challenge will be based on the infamous My Immortal by Tara Gilesbie. What is My Immortal you ask? My Immortal is basically the horrendous fan fiction ever created on the internet based on the J.K. Rowling's Harry Potter universe.
The purpose of bringing this challenge here? Nothing really, I just thought it would be fun. Back 1-2 years ago when this was created/released I attempted to read it through but couldn't because it had so much fail in it, a complete butchery of the English language and the art of fan fiction in general. So, in addition of bringing this challenge here I will also attempt to reread this piece of 'literary work'.
And who knows? For any aspiring writers out there (like me) this might give you insight on what not to do when writing.
Anyways let's get to the FORUM CHALLENGE
The challenge is to basically read the whole fan fiction (Chapters 1 - 44) entirely, the cost? If you succeed you win Internet Pride if you fail you are rewarded with a hit to your Internet Self-Esteem.
So, as of right now, let the FORUM CHALLENGE begin!
... that's how far I got to. Let's me know that this chick is full of shit.
I've seen WASU Cougar fans write better stories than this crap, that's how bad it is.
Come on Azriel you must push forward, you must win the Internet Pride! And no this is all legit, there was no trolling in the creation of this fan fiction.
I kept reading. I'll persist, no matter how bad it gets.
Guys, a fair warning: This chick doesn't know what she's doing and it's very apparent by her writing style and the fact that her target audience is filled with dumbass emos. Prepare to be bombarded by band references and shitty wannabe-goth bullcrap written by a try-hard.
lol @ Chapter 3, line 16.
"We smoked cigarettes and drugs"
Chapter 11:
"I grabbed a steak and almost stuck it into my heart to commit suicide."
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I hate the way you cling to ignorance and pass it off as innocence
"I want to say something but I'll keep it to myself I guess and leave this useless post behind to make you aware that there WAS something... "
-Equinox
"We're like the downtown of the Diablo related internet lol"
-Winged
"Crab and Goyle’s dad was a vampire. He committed suicide by slitting his wrists with a razor. He had raped them and stuff before too. They all got so depressed that they became goffik and converted to Stanism."
AS IS THE LIFE STORY OF EVERYBODY IN THIS FUCKING ABOMINATION!
"They both looked exactly like Ville Vollo."
GOD FUCKING DAMNIT, SHE'S A HIM FAN TOO?! AND A SHITTY ONE TOO, SHE CAN'T EVEN SPELL HIS FUCKING NAME!
"Then………… I took off Draco’s MCR shrift and seductvely took of his pants. He was hung lik a stallone."
“Yes so shut your mputh you inlosent fools!” yelled Proffesor McGoggle. She made us cum into a weird room with white stones all around it"
This is too easy... way too easy.
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I hate the way you cling to ignorance and pass it off as innocence
So, basically, it's all a bunch of wannabe-goth bullshit full of pentagrams, bastardized Satanism, and slitting wrists at the slightest notion of depression. Plus, the story is way too confusing.
Spoiler: Someone with proper grammar and spelling comes into play towards the end and makes reading the story somewhat tolerable.
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I hate the way you cling to ignorance and pass it off as innocence
Voldemort got a dude-ur-so-retarded look on his face. “I hath telekinesis.” he answered cruelly. “And if you doth not kill Vampire, then thou know what will happen to Draco!” he shouted. Then he flew away angrily on his broomstick.
We ran in with our wands out just as we heard a croon voice say. “Allah Kedavra!”
Ugh I'm still trying to stomach through it, on Chapter 19, I'll finish it today! And congrats on Azriel for completing the challenge and others (please say so if you do) you all win Internet Pride!
Tht STORy s so bad it maks my wanna slit my writs. Two bad Ill mess up my hi heel boots n blck mak up with blood.I wsh i had time to rid past chp 13 butt i hav to comit suicide.
Now I've decided to do a FORUM CHALLENGE here on diablofans.com. This challenge will be based on the infamous My Immortal by Tara Gilesbie. What is My Immortal you ask? My Immortal is basically the horrendous fan fiction ever created on the internet based on the J.K. Rowling's Harry Potter universe.
The purpose of bringing this challenge here? Nothing really, I just thought it would be fun. Back 1-2 years ago when this was created/released I attempted to read it through but couldn't because it had so much fail in it, a complete butchery of the English language and the art of fan fiction in general. So, in addition of bringing this challenge here I will also attempt to reread this piece of 'literary work'.
And who knows? For any aspiring writers out there (like me) this might give you insight on what not to do when writing.
Anyways let's get to the FORUM CHALLENGE
The challenge is to basically read the whole fan fiction (Chapters 1 - 44) entirely, the cost? If you succeed you win Internet Pride if you fail you are rewarded with a hit to your Internet Self-Esteem.
So, as of right now, let the FORUM CHALLENGE begin!
Can you handle the Fail? (<--- BTW that's the link to the fan fiction)
-Anathemic One
... that's how far I got to. Let's me know that this chick is full of shit.
I've seen WASU Cougar fans write better stories than this crap, that's how bad it is.
I hate the way you cling to ignorance and pass it off as innocence
Come on Azriel you must push forward, you must win the Internet Pride! And no this is all legit, there was no trolling in the creation of this fan fiction.
HELLA GAY
Guys, a fair warning: This chick doesn't know what she's doing and it's very apparent by her writing style and the fact that her target audience is filled with dumbass emos. Prepare to be bombarded by band references and shitty wannabe-goth bullcrap written by a try-hard.
lol @ Chapter 3, line 16.
"We smoked cigarettes and drugs"
Chapter 11:
"I grabbed a steak and almost stuck it into my heart to commit suicide."
I hate the way you cling to ignorance and pass it off as innocence
-Equinox
"We're like the downtown of the Diablo related internet lol"
-Winged
"Crab and Goyle’s dad was a vampire. He committed suicide by slitting his wrists with a razor. He had raped them and stuff before too. They all got so depressed that they became goffik and converted to Stanism."
AS IS THE LIFE STORY OF EVERYBODY IN THIS FUCKING ABOMINATION!
"They both looked exactly like Ville Vollo."
GOD FUCKING DAMNIT, SHE'S A HIM FAN TOO?! AND A SHITTY ONE TOO, SHE CAN'T EVEN SPELL HIS FUCKING NAME!
"Then………… I took off Draco’s MCR shrift and seductvely took of his pants. He was hung lik a stallone."
“Yes so shut your mputh you inlosent fools!” yelled Proffesor McGoggle. She made us cum into a weird room with white stones all around it"
This is too easy... way too easy.
I hate the way you cling to ignorance and pass it off as innocence
Edit: I did it... I finished.
So, basically, it's all a bunch of wannabe-goth bullshit full of pentagrams, bastardized Satanism, and slitting wrists at the slightest notion of depression. Plus, the story is way too confusing.
Spoiler: Someone with proper grammar and spelling comes into play towards the end and makes reading the story somewhat tolerable.
I hate the way you cling to ignorance and pass it off as innocence
I hate the way you cling to ignorance and pass it off as innocence
These quotes are making my...morning?
Baaaaaziiiing!
As for the story, masterfully crafted piece of literature if I may say so. :rolleyes:
"to the worm in horseradish, the world is horseradish."
and i like how at the end of every chapter theres a note calling out the haters like they know just how awful the story is
- Show with emo band
- Shitty twist
- Sex
- Anger
- Depression
- Slit writs
- goffik
- Did I mention we're goffik?
= SO GOFFIK RITE NAO! =
I hate the way you cling to ignorance and pass it off as innocence
My favorite all-time quotes from it:
“WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING YOU MOTHERF****S!” -Albus Dumbledore