Ok so, this is a drawing I've been working on for the witch doctor...Well, one of them. I intend on painting this or another one.
Note, this is not complete!
I intend to incorporate locust swarm, finish the fallen at the bottom right, and put in a nice background before I begin the painting process.
So, tell me what you think! Don't be afraid to rip it apart with awesome critiqueness
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HHmm..I'll start, I think one of the arms is off in proportion slightly...
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UMPA, FUCK!!!
I literally just posted the community spotlight, like a second ago.
... This will be in the next one.
edit: Lol, exploded at you without any compliments.
I like the pet especially, though there's something about the WD's stomach that seems... off.
Also, is he jabbing at a Fallen in the corner? Or is that going to be an extension of his staff? I think I see shoulders below that head... though they're pretty finely drawn :/. Hard to know for sure.
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Maybe by the next one it will be more complete! ^.^
Also...one of those skulls looks kinda shoddy. I did those pretty fast. It was late.But this is supposed to be just a sketch anyway.
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The plane is off! I know! Grrr... The little summon is in such a weird position and isn't on the same plane as the WD. I'm new to planes (or is it plains...I think it is...IDK) so drawing stuff near and far in congruence with the rest of the stuff is still hard.
Glad you like his anatomy, I've been plugging away at anatomy for some time now since I realized I sucked at it only a few months ago. I mean, I still suck at it, but not as bad.
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Lol, better anatomy than I could do, you should've seen my most recent print, my fucking god, turned out shitty.
And huzzah! I'm actually quite good with perspective.
Your problem right now, is that the left arm on your pet is down too far, it looks like it the hand should be in the ground. Just move it back a bit, like up, so that you're looking less down at it, and more across at it, if that makes any sense at all.
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"One in every 10 million people can potentially have a headache from this pill." God forbid she is the 0.000000001% of having a headache.
His stomach is supposed to be pudgy. Is the pudge off? This was the first time for me drawing a stomach not super tone with abs lol.
Thanks so much Zhar, I'll definitely try to fix the lil' mongrel.
Gaahhh, I just noticed that actually the perspective with the fallen is super off. I wanted him on the ground with the rod in his face. But really it looks like the Fallen is approaching the WD and just coming into sight...HHmmm...How to fix this...
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i mean hes skinny then his stomach just pops out but its still fits the witchdoctor and the fallen ya i agree it does look like the fallen is approaching him
i mean hes skinny then his stomach just pops out but its still fits the witchdoctor and the fallen ya i agree it does look like the fallen is approaching him
I know!!And it ruins the whole idea lol. Now the witchdoctor looks like hes just standing there starring at the ground. I don't know what to do! Oh the humanity!
Zhar you should post your work.
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I know!!And it ruins the whole idea lol. Now the witchdoctor looks like hes just standing there starring at the ground. I don't know what to do! Oh the humanity!
Zhar you should post your work.
its not bad it actually looks like hes ready to fight the fallen demon and is looking at him i think its actually really good
Thanks so much Zenith. I'm going to have to rethink what else is in the image now.
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I like it a lot dude! Let's see, as for critisism, the skulls are a little rough, his right foot looks like he's stepping on the pets paw, and he's got a beer belly, but other than that A+ awesome.
Thanks for pointing out the foot! I had not even noticed it. The beer belly is intentional!
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"We're like the downtown of the Diablo related internet lol"
-Winged
Things to fix:
Both knees need to be pivoted outwards a tad.
The left arm needs to be larger overall.
Right collarbone should be extruding upwards more from the body, or the right shoulder should be lowered a bit.
Ribcage could possibly be a tad wider, and remember, the bottom of the pecs should almost meet with the center of the rib cage.
Left bicep should be longer and rotated up on the arm a bit more, and you should be able to see the left armpit. The shoulder muscle should go up and over bicep as well.
Right foot has a problem with the toes. The big toe should be almost the only one visable at that angle. Bring the big toe out a full toe length, and push the last two toes back a fraction.
The mongrel's feet need some work. Look at dog feet pictures and just add a longer nail on those.
Also, dog muscle structure is significantly different than human structure. The mongrel's front legs are bent at a human angle, not a canine angle.
Really good things I noticed:
The mask, the arm band, the skulls (except the bottom one's jaw needs to be shrunk down a bit.
Sorry for the ripping apart. It is actually a very well done drawing, and with subtle changes could be stunning.
Dude, your awesome!!!I'm going to sit down and check off each one of these things. Thanks soooo much man, you have no idea how much I appreciate that. I am in debt to you!
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Personally, I'd just take the jaw off that lower skull. You don't need it- it could be perfectly justified that with age and use it shouldn't even be there- and it would be less work. I have to say that the staff and the feathers off the top of the mask are my favorite parts so far
Seth...You have true vision my friend. Those are my favorite part as well.
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"We're like the downtown of the Diablo related internet lol"
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Note, this is not complete!
I intend to incorporate locust swarm, finish the fallen at the bottom right, and put in a nice background before I begin the painting process.
So, tell me what you think! Don't be afraid to rip it apart with awesome critiqueness
-Equinox
"We're like the downtown of the Diablo related internet lol"
-Winged
-Equinox
"We're like the downtown of the Diablo related internet lol"
-Winged
I literally just posted the community spotlight, like a second ago.
... This will be in the next one.
edit: Lol, exploded at you without any compliments.
I like the pet especially, though there's something about the WD's stomach that seems... off.
Also, is he jabbing at a Fallen in the corner? Or is that going to be an extension of his staff? I think I see shoulders below that head... though they're pretty finely drawn :/. Hard to know for sure.
Maybe by the next one it will be more complete! ^.^
Also...one of those skulls looks kinda shoddy. I did those pretty fast. It was late.But this is supposed to be just a sketch anyway.
-Equinox
"We're like the downtown of the Diablo related internet lol"
-Winged
And yeah, I noticed that. The jawbone looks really ripped.
Though, the anatomy on the WD is fucking fantastic.
Also, may consider moving the pet back a bit, perspective seems a bit odd.
edit: Jealous of your hand drawing skills, I'm bloody terrible at drawing them.
The plane is off! I know! Grrr... The little summon is in such a weird position and isn't on the same plane as the WD. I'm new to planes (or is it plains...I think it is...IDK) so drawing stuff near and far in congruence with the rest of the stuff is still hard.
Glad you like his anatomy, I've been plugging away at anatomy for some time now since I realized I sucked at it only a few months ago. I mean, I still suck at it, but not as bad.
-Equinox
"We're like the downtown of the Diablo related internet lol"
-Winged
And huzzah! I'm actually quite good with perspective.
Your problem right now, is that the left arm on your pet is down too far, it looks like it the hand should be in the ground. Just move it back a bit, like up, so that you're looking less down at it, and more across at it, if that makes any sense at all.
Thanks so much Zhar, I'll definitely try to fix the lil' mongrel.
Gaahhh, I just noticed that actually the perspective with the fallen is super off. I wanted him on the ground with the rod in his face. But really it looks like the Fallen is approaching the WD and just coming into sight...HHmmm...How to fix this...
-Equinox
"We're like the downtown of the Diablo related internet lol"
-Winged
I know!!And it ruins the whole idea lol. Now the witchdoctor looks like hes just standing there starring at the ground. I don't know what to do! Oh the humanity!
Zhar you should post your work.
-Equinox
"We're like the downtown of the Diablo related internet lol"
-Winged
-Equinox
"We're like the downtown of the Diablo related internet lol"
-Winged
-Equinox
"We're like the downtown of the Diablo related internet lol"
-Winged
Both knees need to be pivoted outwards a tad.
The left arm needs to be larger overall.
Right collarbone should be extruding upwards more from the body, or the right shoulder should be lowered a bit.
Ribcage could possibly be a tad wider, and remember, the bottom of the pecs should almost meet with the center of the rib cage.
Left bicep should be longer and rotated up on the arm a bit more, and you should be able to see the left armpit. The shoulder muscle should go up and over bicep as well.
Right foot has a problem with the toes. The big toe should be almost the only one visable at that angle. Bring the big toe out a full toe length, and push the last two toes back a fraction.
The mongrel's feet need some work. Look at dog feet pictures and just add a longer nail on those.
Also, dog muscle structure is significantly different than human structure. The mongrel's front legs are bent at a human angle, not a canine angle.
Really good things I noticed:
The mask, the arm band, the skulls (except the bottom one's jaw needs to be shrunk down a bit.
Sorry for the ripping apart. It is actually a very well done drawing, and with subtle changes could be stunning.
-Equinox
"We're like the downtown of the Diablo related internet lol"
-Winged
-Equinox
"We're like the downtown of the Diablo related internet lol"
-Winged
and are you going to color or leave it a sketch cuz i think thats all it needs