sry guys i was playen devil may cry 3 (awsome game) well heres chapter 5
The man sailed away on his wretched ship as the ocean waves threw him and tossed him into a massive hurricane. He held on tight to the deck as the storms shrouded the skys. Clouds lightning rain the man prayed for his servival but just as the sun the mans future looked dim soon to be devoured by the storms hunger. When it seem to be at its peek of danger the strorm stopped, the ocean grew quite and the gray clouds swirled into the center. Then the man stood up for the first time gaining his sense of balance. He looked up and saw a giant eye. The man was startled at first and drew his sword. The eye just glared at the man for a moment the man was petrefied then the eye spoke. "I am the eye of the storm, many of us tear throught the ocean and feed the seas of men who dare to traspass our sacrate waters. But our race of hurricanes grow smaller evry day. Their is a Warlock by the name of Mandricle who dwells deep in the sea far from our bounderys of strike. We need you to head to atlantis north of here there you will reach a dock that extends far into the ocean. Once you are there you must free our beloved Denzz. She is our water mage the protector of the seas, our mother. She has been kept captive by Mandricle. Once you free her she will grant you the power to defeat this demon. Now go and rid the seas of this intrudor. The hurricane fadded away, the wind blew and the spiral of destruction revealed a golden city beyond the horrizon. The man had no other choice his path has already been chosen for him, maybe with This new gift the man could cure his infected home and possibly save his brother from this virus. The man reached the docks of atlantis. Once he gatherd his gear he walked into the city. The city was huge and massivie in size, the buildings reached the skys and the streets paved with gold. The man payed no attention to the gold or silver. The man went in search for some information. The citys air was filled with silence and the area was motionless. Only the sounds of the desending ocean was noticable. When the men enterd deeper into the city all that was odd were statues of people, many of em scatterd through the streets and a giant tree in the center of the square. The man crept through the streets of atlantis when he herd a small shriek behind the shopps. The man ran and found a middle age woman. He asked her not to be afraid but her eyes flaired up and she began to scream. He tried his hardest to comfort her but it was no use. The earth started to tremble. The earth suddenly stopped and the woman stoood quiet. The man asked the lady where all the people where. She scolded at him told him that they where all around, frozen in their steps petrifieid into stone, the city of atlantis was cursed. The man looked around and noticed the faces of the cursed victums, twisted, young children frozen in their place, wemon at the bakery, men at labor it seemed time had stopped for atlantis. The wemon spoke of how the curse started when golden hearts of men turned to dust. The city was mainly purity. If the land had men with hearts of darkness all the people on the island would be cast to stone as a punishment. The man asked how come she was not cursed. She told him of the elder, portector of the seas and atlantis, Denzz, gave her a ring that would protect her for her duties. She had helped Denzz defeat a threat to the seas in return she recived the ring. The man knew that the sorce of the evil came from the tree. The tree was huge and the essense was stronger. The man asked for the ring, bonding a promis to rid Atlantis of this retchid curse. The woman had no choice but to hand over the ring. The man placed the ring of Denzz over the mystical guntlets he recived before. The woman instantly froze into a statue with desperation on her face and hope in her eyes. The man turnd towards the tree and marched into its bark. This tree of destruction was not simmilar to the one before, this one was huge and the man could not destroy it with his blade. So he enterd the tree. Inside the tree the essence of evil smutherd the man, the ring began to glow and protected him from any ailment that could effect him. Deeper and deeper into the tree the man fended of demons and fiends. The man had finaly reached the center of the tree where he found another trapped angil. The man ran up to the angil and tried to wake him. The angil was uncontious and the man did not know how to free him. The man heard foot steps. He turned and looked around, but saw nothing. The steps grew closer but ther was nothing in sight. The man demanded to know who was comming or what... but no response was giving. The man turned around and tried to free the angil. The man looked for a solution and bashed the cage with his sword. It was no use, the man peered at his sword with frustration when he saw the reflection of a massive grunt. This demon spoke. She told the man that he was foolish to enter a dome of hell and he will pay the price with his soul. This demon had fiery red hair that drooped down to the ground and a giant syth. The golden eyes burned into the mans soul as he was imobolized. The man struggled to free himself from her gaze as she crept towards him. She tuanted him and explaind how she was a gardian, sent from hell by diablo to keep high ranking angils captive and use their understanding of good to convert innocent humans into vile savages. The man Could not move, he looked deep into his soul as the vile demon raised her syth. The ring began to glow and the special guard began to flow through his body and as quik as light the man raised his sowrd and sliced the chest of the demon. The demon backd off and lowerd her syth. The demon roard in a fural rage and attaked the man. The man jumped side to side dodging the demons fierce attack. The man grew weiry and rolled to the side cocked his sword back and threw his sword into her face. He ran up to her and released the sword by pushing with his feet off her noes. This demon at 12 feet threw the man to the ground. The man landed infront of her and rolled between her legs slicing her ankels, she fell to her knees. The man began to hack at the demon as she cried in pain. The demon stood up and back handed the man. She stomped and dropped the man to the floor. She then picked up her weapon and luanched her syth into a spiral towards the man, he quikly raised his sword deflecting the syth blade to blade. As the spark flamed when they met the demon was astonished by his skill. She charged at him with claws in the air ripping the earth under her feet with her ferocity. The mans agility rose and spun around the demon as if he had flashed befor her eys into a blurr. The man leaped into the air and grapsed her hair. He yanked her hair and her head tilted backwards. the man let out a fierce battle cry and with hair in hand he pulled her back took aim at her neck and sliced her throat wide open. She collopsed to her knees crushing her caps as her neck gushed blood onto the man and her soul was recalled back to hell. Her courps burned to ashes as her golden eyes melted. The man walked to the demons syth and swung at the cage. The angil was free and began to breath. A few moments passed and the angil rose from the ground.
I am Arch angil Raziel and ive come to assure the safty of the sacrade land of atlantis. I was over whelmed by the forces that you have destroyed. I was foolish to belive that i would be strong enough to withstand the power of a tree of destruction. This is one of many mighty trees wich roots bide its power. i will grant you with the power of IRON STEEL which streanthins your weapon enableing the it to pierce the mightiest of defenses. Take this gift and remove this tree from these lands. Destroy the roots and have the order restored.
After granting the man with his new power the angil brusted into feathers returning to the heavens to aid his brothers and sisters into combat. The man new his objective abd coverd every end of the trees den and sliced all the roots that dwelled under atlantis's crust. When the last root was cut, the man walked into the center of the tree and raised his ring. The ring began to glow and flashed blinding all demons that were still alive in the tree. The tree burned into ashes, the flash also coverd the city revalitizing it to its normal state. The humans did not notice the curse, time did stop for them but the woman new of the horrors but was thankful for the kept promis. The man stood in the middle of the city, with his sword in hand. The woman ran towards him and explaind he was a friend of Denzz. The city was normal but their was still a task in hand. The rescue of Denzz.
hold up ill write more i got problms with aim sum fag says he goin hackk me lol
wow gay name for an archagel. sounds too much like tyreal. cmon. get a better name
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You fucking retarded ass sonofabitch! You seriously think you could cast a fireball at Gheed just because you were a n00b137 enough to gamble in the beginning of the game? Well i got a few words for you: NOT IN TOWN, MOUTHAFUCKA!
You fucking retarded ass sonofabitch! You seriously think you could cast a fireball at Gheed just because you were a n00b137 enough to gamble in the beginning of the game? Well i got a few words for you: NOT IN TOWN, MOUTHAFUCKA!
ya thad be cool to get it patented and published and all but i think the whole gettin sued part would blow haha....maybe blizz will hire u in the future
truesdale is a water gardian so i tought it would be appropiate since their in atlantis but thanx for the negative feed back on the name ill change it..... since these angils will play an important roll in the end of my story i figure the names should be cool
lol yeah thats what i wanted implied so people new what i meant when i said 'Petrified' but the demons head wasnt cut off the man mearly sliced her throut to have her death painful and slow just like the monitor. Thats what demons deserve
please do so man this is really gettin good
just like D3 which better be comin out soon
HeartlessKiller
The man sailed away on his wretched ship as the ocean waves threw him and tossed him into a massive hurricane. He held on tight to the deck as the storms shrouded the skys. Clouds lightning rain the man prayed for his servival but just as the sun the mans future looked dim soon to be devoured by the storms hunger. When it seem to be at its peek of danger the strorm stopped, the ocean grew quite and the gray clouds swirled into the center. Then the man stood up for the first time gaining his sense of balance. He looked up and saw a giant eye. The man was startled at first and drew his sword. The eye just glared at the man for a moment the man was petrefied then the eye spoke. "I am the eye of the storm, many of us tear throught the ocean and feed the seas of men who dare to traspass our sacrate waters. But our race of hurricanes grow smaller evry day. Their is a Warlock by the name of Mandricle who dwells deep in the sea far from our bounderys of strike. We need you to head to atlantis north of here there you will reach a dock that extends far into the ocean. Once you are there you must free our beloved Denzz. She is our water mage the protector of the seas, our mother. She has been kept captive by Mandricle. Once you free her she will grant you the power to defeat this demon. Now go and rid the seas of this intrudor. The hurricane fadded away, the wind blew and the spiral of destruction revealed a golden city beyond the horrizon. The man had no other choice his path has already been chosen for him, maybe with This new gift the man could cure his infected home and possibly save his brother from this virus. The man reached the docks of atlantis. Once he gatherd his gear he walked into the city. The city was huge and massivie in size, the buildings reached the skys and the streets paved with gold. The man payed no attention to the gold or silver. The man went in search for some information. The citys air was filled with silence and the area was motionless. Only the sounds of the desending ocean was noticable. When the men enterd deeper into the city all that was odd were statues of people, many of em scatterd through the streets and a giant tree in the center of the square. The man crept through the streets of atlantis when he herd a small shriek behind the shopps. The man ran and found a middle age woman. He asked her not to be afraid but her eyes flaired up and she began to scream. He tried his hardest to comfort her but it was no use. The earth started to tremble. The earth suddenly stopped and the woman stoood quiet. The man asked the lady where all the people where. She scolded at him told him that they where all around, frozen in their steps petrifieid into stone, the city of atlantis was cursed. The man looked around and noticed the faces of the cursed victums, twisted, young children frozen in their place, wemon at the bakery, men at labor it seemed time had stopped for atlantis. The wemon spoke of how the curse started when golden hearts of men turned to dust. The city was mainly purity. If the land had men with hearts of darkness all the people on the island would be cast to stone as a punishment. The man asked how come she was not cursed. She told him of the elder, portector of the seas and atlantis, Denzz, gave her a ring that would protect her for her duties. She had helped Denzz defeat a threat to the seas in return she recived the ring. The man knew that the sorce of the evil came from the tree. The tree was huge and the essense was stronger. The man asked for the ring, bonding a promis to rid Atlantis of this retchid curse. The woman had no choice but to hand over the ring. The man placed the ring of Denzz over the mystical guntlets he recived before. The woman instantly froze into a statue with desperation on her face and hope in her eyes. The man turnd towards the tree and marched into its bark. This tree of destruction was not simmilar to the one before, this one was huge and the man could not destroy it with his blade. So he enterd the tree. Inside the tree the essence of evil smutherd the man, the ring began to glow and protected him from any ailment that could effect him. Deeper and deeper into the tree the man fended of demons and fiends. The man had finaly reached the center of the tree where he found another trapped angil. The man ran up to the angil and tried to wake him. The angil was uncontious and the man did not know how to free him. The man heard foot steps. He turned and looked around, but saw nothing. The steps grew closer but ther was nothing in sight. The man demanded to know who was comming or what... but no response was giving. The man turned around and tried to free the angil. The man looked for a solution and bashed the cage with his sword. It was no use, the man peered at his sword with frustration when he saw the reflection of a massive grunt. This demon spoke. She told the man that he was foolish to enter a dome of hell and he will pay the price with his soul. This demon had fiery red hair that drooped down to the ground and a giant syth. The golden eyes burned into the mans soul as he was imobolized. The man struggled to free himself from her gaze as she crept towards him. She tuanted him and explaind how she was a gardian, sent from hell by diablo to keep high ranking angils captive and use their understanding of good to convert innocent humans into vile savages. The man Could not move, he looked deep into his soul as the vile demon raised her syth. The ring began to glow and the special guard began to flow through his body and as quik as light the man raised his sowrd and sliced the chest of the demon. The demon backd off and lowerd her syth. The demon roard in a fural rage and attaked the man. The man jumped side to side dodging the demons fierce attack. The man grew weiry and rolled to the side cocked his sword back and threw his sword into her face. He ran up to her and released the sword by pushing with his feet off her noes. This demon at 12 feet threw the man to the ground. The man landed infront of her and rolled between her legs slicing her ankels, she fell to her knees. The man began to hack at the demon as she cried in pain. The demon stood up and back handed the man. She stomped and dropped the man to the floor. She then picked up her weapon and luanched her syth into a spiral towards the man, he quikly raised his sword deflecting the syth blade to blade. As the spark flamed when they met the demon was astonished by his skill. She charged at him with claws in the air ripping the earth under her feet with her ferocity. The mans agility rose and spun around the demon as if he had flashed befor her eys into a blurr. The man leaped into the air and grapsed her hair. He yanked her hair and her head tilted backwards. the man let out a fierce battle cry and with hair in hand he pulled her back took aim at her neck and sliced her throat wide open. She collopsed to her knees crushing her caps as her neck gushed blood onto the man and her soul was recalled back to hell. Her courps burned to ashes as her golden eyes melted. The man walked to the demons syth and swung at the cage. The angil was free and began to breath. A few moments passed and the angil rose from the ground.
I am Arch angil Raziel and ive come to assure the safty of the sacrade land of atlantis. I was over whelmed by the forces that you have destroyed. I was foolish to belive that i would be strong enough to withstand the power of a tree of destruction. This is one of many mighty trees wich roots bide its power. i will grant you with the power of IRON STEEL which streanthins your weapon enableing the it to pierce the mightiest of defenses. Take this gift and remove this tree from these lands. Destroy the roots and have the order restored.
After granting the man with his new power the angil brusted into feathers returning to the heavens to aid his brothers and sisters into combat. The man new his objective abd coverd every end of the trees den and sliced all the roots that dwelled under atlantis's crust. When the last root was cut, the man walked into the center of the tree and raised his ring. The ring began to glow and flashed blinding all demons that were still alive in the tree. The tree burned into ashes, the flash also coverd the city revalitizing it to its normal state. The humans did not notice the curse, time did stop for them but the woman new of the horrors but was thankful for the kept promis. The man stood in the middle of the city, with his sword in hand. The woman ran towards him and explaind he was a friend of Denzz. The city was normal but their was still a task in hand. The rescue of Denzz.
hold up ill write more i got problms with aim sum fag says he goin hackk me lol
ummm Medusa where here eyes turn everything to stone and like the hero
cuts off her head and sets everything right... but it still is awesome story
really dont get me wrong : )