Hmmm... Interesting build. I wouldn't use shock pulse though, as it's unpredictable and in PvP you kinda want to go for precise hits rather than relying on something random.
Also, I'm not really sure if Glass Cannon will be viable. But we will see whenever we get to 1.1!
I'd be a little concerned about your survivability outside of archon form. In PvP there's a lot less targets around so critical mass won't be able to be as effective as it is in PvE. If I were you I'd try to work in teleport somewhere in your main spells. There's a lot of good runes for teleport that are overlooked in today's builds. Also, shock pulses can be dodged and you'll have issues against monks using a dash build I think.